it is more important to keep old friends than make new friends
Most people are on the same page that relationships and good friends play an important role in each person's life, keeping the friendship and relations are very essential in people social and personal life. The importance of making new friends or keeping old friends always questioned among people and scholar. In my opinion, maintaining the relation with old friends is more important. Following reasons will elaborate on my opinion.
First, definitely, the old friends have great recognition of each other, they may know each other for many years and also, have a deep understanding of their behavioral features. This understanding gives them an ability to be a good partner in happiness or more important in harsh and severe condition. As they know each other well, they can help each other to solve problems, etc. In my personal life, for instance, I have a close friend from school, whose name is Amir, he knows me very well and even can anticipate my think or read my mind by looking my facial expression. When I was not in the mood, I went to him to ask for some helpful advice.
The second reason is: as people get older, they have a lot of things to do and are too busy. They just care about their family and their closely old friends and may have not enough time to find new friends or spend time and care about them. Further, it is hard to trust to new people and even building trust take time. It is needless to say that having a great friendship, will require time and recognition. Therefore, people may try to keep their friends rather than accept the risk of finding new people and being friends with them.
It is crystal clear that developing friend zone and communication are very beneficial for each person’s life as they can use their new friends’ knowledge, experience, etc. But based on aforementioned reasons, I think keeping old friends has high priority than looking for a new one.
To sum up, old friends could be a great companion for each person's in any condition of their life, they have good understanding and comprehension of your features can be very influential in your life, so I suggest to keep old friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... friends play an important role in each persons life, keeping the friendship and relati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78191489362 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68040644532 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521276595745 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3057382474 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.764705882 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396873113118 0.236089414692 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141629296325 0.076458572812 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151962695485 0.0737576698707 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246746952364 0.150856017488 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116944229463 0.0645574589148 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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