nation should follow same national curriculum for all students
At high school level, students must assess themselves in which subject they are good and want to pursue their career . This decision should be taken by each every youngster before entering the college so that they can only study in which they are interested and dont burdened themselves by studying extra subject. For this reason it is essential for all students to follow the same national curriculum inorder to get the chance to evaluate themselves and think cautiosly about their field which they will choose to study in the college.
As teenagers are very impulsive they do not have much knowledge and experience. But they possess excellent grasping power , although not very much good in evaluating themselves. Suppose if they have to choose their specialization in 9th standard and at that they are not mature enough to make such decisions and somebody has choosen Life Science as its specialization without giving a second though to his decision. After attending zoology Practical lab which mainly comprises of frog disection , human skeleton, etc, the student realises that
he has made a blunder and life science is not its cup of tea and he will surely not going to pursue his career in this field as he has phobia of blood. So asked his incharge for changing his stream as he is not going to attend the classes anymore. And it will create lot of mismanagement and make the school administration more complex. So it is necessary that there should be same syallbus for all students until they enter the college. so that they mature enough to make sensible decisions about their future.
As majority of the students became very tangible and goal-oriented after entering the college as they have choosen their field of interest according to their interest. At this moment it is necessary to enhance their skills and make them veteran in their fields so that they can get better jobs after college and for this the syllabus of each student should consist of papers of their subject only, so that they can focus on their stream and escalate their knowledge wee by wee. At college level, it must be necessary to not teach complementary subjects
to students as they are not at all interested in .
Thus, it is important that the nation should follow same curriculum for students so that it can help them to get what they are good at.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 33.0505617978 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86783042394 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54721726704 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461346633416 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 596.7 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.2154221769 60.3974514979 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.133333333 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7333333333 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.21951772744 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220201452946 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922782352925 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138556483883 0.0758088955206 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167433649526 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137305377801 0.0667264976115 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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