There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
In this day and age, we are experiencing a prosperity of music worldwide and almost everyone can find his or her favourite music genre. In this essay I will elaborate on the possible reasons that music is necessary to our daily life and the significance of traditional music.
It is unquestionable that music plays an important role in our life. From the very beginning of the human culture, our ancestors sung and invented simple musical instruments in order to express their emotions. It is no exaggeration to say that the history of human is the history of musical development. Besides, in today's accelerated pace of life, people have less direct opportunities to communicate with others. Under this circumstance, music works as a bridge to interlink people from different areas as they can generate sentimental resonate towards the same tune. In addition, music can regulate people's emotions. When one is frustrated, for example, listening to positive and vivacious tunes can possibly make him feel lighter and brighter.
On the other hand, with the development of the international contemporary music such as pop or rock, traditional music are in less popularity especially among young generation. In my opinion, traditional music is a non-material heritage of a culture, which represents their long history. Those music genres have great artistic value and they are precious treasure of a country, which should be protected and inherited by young generations. Although some of them are difficult to appreciate compared with the widespread pop music, they have their own irreplaceable aesthetic and researching value. Therefore they are equally important with the international music and should be emphasised by governments and cultural protecting organisations.
In the light of these facts, music is essential to individual and also the whole society. Meanwhile, people should focus more on appreciating traditional music as they are of no less importance than the international modern music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45686900958 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14696323446 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584664536741 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5060045925 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418610456225 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153080800499 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869945353565 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287104349548 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525667117053 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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