Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
We know that the advancements in the science and technology solved a lot of problem of the human life. There are some problem's which can't be solved with the help of science and techology. The prompt suggest that one day all of the society's problems wil be solved by science and technology. In my opinion, I disagree with the suggestion because of the following reasons.
To begin with, it's true that the science had done the groundbreaking innovation in last two hundred years. Yet, there are several problems related to people's behaviour which can't be solved using the advanced technology. Rather than solving problems some scientific innovations increases the some of the societies problems. For example, the everlasting problem of the poverty since thousands of years can't be solved using any science or technology. Although, the dvelopment in automation industries decrease the demand of labour and most of the peoples lost their job's. So, as scientific advancement helping one segment of the soiceity paralley it's harming other segment of the society. Also, this type of development gives the power to the one who is holding it. Consequently, other people lives under the threat of them. As science and technology can't control over the people's behaviour. For example, development of the nuclear technology is good for any country. However, as one country create the more and more nuclear bomb it's threatning the other countries and it will create dispute between countries. Thus, we can say that the scientific development can solve the problem of some area but it's undermine the other segment of societies where problem becomes more stronger.
Furthermore, it's the scientific and technological development, which creates the numerous problems related to environments. People's are compromising the enviroments in favor of the sicentifc developments. Consequently, it will increase the problem of society rather than solving the problems. For instance, the advancement of the automobile, chemical and computer industries solved the many problems of society's. However, due to the release of harmful toxic elements in enviroments, it's indirectly creating the problems for society. We are facing the problems like rising in earth temprature, rising in sea levels, changing in seasonal cycle, increasing in air pollution, etc. The above example illustrate that the there are problems in the society which are the result of the scienticfic development, so we can't say the sicence can solve all the problem of the society's.
Of course, it's true that the human life becomes more easy and lavish due to the advancements in the science and technology. However, it doesn't mean that it's able to provide benefit to individual human being on the earth. We know that there are people's who are living very poor life in third world country. Also, people's behaviour like greed and enimosity which create a lot problems, can't be controlled using science and technolgy.
All things considering, we can say that there are some field where science and technology solved the many issues of society. However, there are some fields where science and technolgy is incapable to provide solutions.Also, sometimes science creates the more problems while soving the other problems. Consequently, science will never be able to solve the all the problems of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
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...me scientific innovations increases the some of the societies problems. For example,...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...me scientific innovations increases the some of the societies problems. For example, the ev...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
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...ng one segment of the soiceity paralley its harming other segment of the society. A...
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Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, third, thus, while, for example, for instance, of course, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2819.0 2235.4752809 126% => OK
No of words: 533.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28893058161 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86869307204 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.427767354597 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 872.1 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6748059715 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.9666666667 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7666666667 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 22.0 5.13820224719 428% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445793292592 0.243740707755 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126052226469 0.0831039109588 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129337722089 0.0758088955206 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286545227901 0.150359130593 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120672773718 0.0667264976115 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.