In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Home is considered as the place where people gather after a productive and exhausting day. In some areas, there is a mindset that individuals would sooner own a home than rent one. In this essay, I will present the reasons of this social phenomenon and utterly believe that it has negative influences on our environment as well as government.
To commence with, people in different countries would prefer to own a home due to some reasons. First and foremost, a splendid house is widely known as a sign of success and wealth of oneself. As a result, possessing a home can reflect directly these values and contribute to appraise an individual. Last but not least, living in a renting home can cause many problems in daily life. For instance, whenever students are in need for relaxation or preparation for exams, they have to be in the extremely tranquil and quiet place in order to utilize their memory and productivity. However, annoying and disrespectful neighbors can sometimes make unexpected noise, which impacts negatively the students in a long run. Therefore, citizens in some regions consider owning a home to be more necessary as soon as possible.
In my opinion, this situation is definitely a negative one as regards to the government policy and the Earth’s surface. Nowadays, overpopulation is a tremendous issue for various non-profit organizations and leaders of countries, so this mindset about endeavor of owning a home would worsen the worldwide challenge. On the other hand, materials needed to construct a home are directly taken from natural resources from the wild, which are alarmingly exhausting and endured exploitation from human. Thus, this phenomenon perhaps influences both the environmental sustainability and exploitation resources of the wild habitat.
In conclusion, there are different reasons for people in some nations to prioritize owning a home rather than renting one. Despite these reasons, this mindset still impact negatively on the environment and government. I think government should co-invest with private investors to build more public homestays for workforce or the ownerships should be concern for undesirable outcomes from such a decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 351, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'concerned'?
Suggestion: concerned
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, as regards, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02864838802 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577586206897 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8363615157 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.176470588 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76470588235 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359595259422 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10579049173 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785841205906 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219704385834 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493375343932 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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