Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
As the old adage goes "men are distributed not by things but they are distributed by the view which they take of them”. The contentious issue at present is about the bad situation of the denizens such as unsatisfactory job, shortage of money and many more. People espouse the notion that it is best to accept a bad situation and difficulties for life. I opine that it is better to do hard work and make improvement in situations.
To begin with, the people except their bad situation because they think their horoscope is not good and written only about difficult situations in their life and they don`t try to face that situations again. Furthermore, sometimes the economic is in downward stage and many business are bankrupt or stop their business and employees are remove from the work in order to not have abundant money and the proponents don`t apply for other job and there is shortage of money in their family. For example, a survey of 2020 elucidates that 45% of denizens has shortage of money and give-up from life because they accept their bad situations.
Secondly, I vehemently believe that if the citizens are passing from bad situations, they have to do hard work so that at one point they will achieve success and. Similarly, if there is shortage of money, the people have to work more in office or part-time rather than sitting idle for whole day. To exemplify, A report of 2021 illustrates due to covid-19 pandemic, the middle class people have unsatisfactory with job but they are doing overtime to get more penny covid-19 pandemic.
In conclusion, In conclusion, from an overall perspective without a shadow of doubt, I am inclined to believe that the if we want to be success in life so we have to hard work and try to improve the difficult situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79032258065 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73555424438 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4539700777 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1818181818 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253985610987 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102985366465 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718141260453 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151363369422 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854366348495 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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