Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Policies that focus on protecting environment should not be imposed upon multinational organizations as they generate profit and boost the economy; even though they cause damage to the environment.
I strongly disagree with the expression that policies focused on environmental protection should not be imposed on multinational organizations, solely because they generate profit and boost the economy. Environmental hazards are a real threat to us. So the policies that control them should be implemented without bias.
Multinational organizations produce material on a large scale. Thus, pollutants emitted by them or other environmentally unfriendly processes performed by them produce a large amount of waste as well. There are many organizations that do not follow certain laws like producing beyond limit or using machines without maintenance. These are violations of safety and are hazardous activities. This is why protective policies need to be implemented, to safeguard the environment. If the policies are implemented, multinational companies will have to abide by them and hence, keep a check on all of their processes, or else, the chances of incurring damages are high.
Multinational organizations are opulent and thus, they can afford to abide by the policies or switch to sustainable options. Since they can afford to pay for it, it will be beneficial for the environment as well if the changes were implied.
It is considered that, since multinational organizations generate profit and boost the economy, protective policies should not be imposed on them. But the bigger the organization, the greater is the environmental risk. Thus, to keep that in check the policies must be implied.
As mentioned above, it is believed that multinational organizations shouldn't be imposed with protective policies because they generate profit. But this can in turn adversely affect the smaller organizations, who will have the policies imposed on them. This could lead to their profits being cut and thus, less growth on their part. Entrepreneurs who build new startups will be hesitant to do so owing to the policies.
Thus, I would like to conclude that the implementation of the policies must be based on the protocols and safety measures followed by an organization. It should be dependent on the environmental measures being implemented in the organization and not on the size or profit of the organization. It is because, in the end, it is all about saving the planet.
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- Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and supporting your position you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these c 16
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ipants in the event. What if there were a large number of participants fifteen years ago and the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...age count can be considered arbitrary. The statistics state that the number of ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ers to take more risks is presumptive. The initiative of launching an education...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the importance of the protective gear? Thus, it can be concluded that the incre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 2260.96107784 65% => OK
No of words: 289.0 441.139720559 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10726643599 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76032193098 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 204.123752495 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484429065744 0.468620217663 103% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 705.55239521 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3645846961 57.8364921388 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4 119.503703932 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 23.324526521 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.26666666667 5.70786347227 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0775432935574 0.218282227539 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277568424102 0.0743258471296 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281934261632 0.0701772020484 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0521797718016 0.128457276422 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308978933386 0.0628817314937 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 98.500998004 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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