Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, thanks to the development of integrated economies and Globalization, citizens can purchase similar products from all over the world, which has led to the fact that each nation is becoming similar to the others. Consequently, many positive and negative outcomes have approached this phenomenon.
To begin with, many FDIs have received from developed countries to build many innovative infrastructures such as streets, hotels, industrial areas that are the same technology in their countries. As a result, this fosters migration from nation to nation and contributes a high-quality workforce for other countries, especially developing and undeveloped ones. In addition, there is a likelihood that the similarity in items develops the communication from race to race. Consequently, it brings people together and erases racism and discrimination which are certainly a backlash nowadays.
On the other hand, globalization minimizes the global market into a global village that may lead to the loss of cultural customs and diversity. For example, Vietnamese teenagers recently tend to choose international brands that mostly originate from the Us and Korea influenced by K-pop culture, as a result, Ao Dai - a traditional costume, is no longer on their preferable list.
In a nutshell, besides, there are disadvantages in the phenomenon that global citizens are now using the same products, in the long run, this can boost up every nation's economy, awareness, and bonding between citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...n the long run, this can boost up every nations economy, awareness, and bonding between...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, may, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59030837004 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19171400966 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656387665198 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.1216525704 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5555555556 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153566347679 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604385542296 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474899115541 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890730441277 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750420482208 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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