Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, global warming has become one of the most serious threat to life on Earth. However, some people argue that human should try to adapt to climate change, rather than making efforts to fight against it. In my opinion, I totally disapprove of this standpoint and will give my reasons in this essay.
To commence with, it is impossible to live mutually with climate change in the long run. This is because to some point in the future, this phenomenon may reach its limits due to the ignorance of human, which possibly results in various unprecedented problems to human’s life. For example, global warming can lead to an increase in the general temperature, and once it reaches the highest level, ice in two polars will melt, which means a constant rise in the sea level. As a result, several natural disasters will occur, including storms and floods. In fact, according to a research in 2017, if climate change continued at its current speed without human’s actions, sea level would rise by 6 metres by the year 2100. This will possibly lead to the disapperance of many coastal areas, unwanted loss of lives, properties and raise social unrests in many countries.
In addition, I believe that preventing climate change with all available sources will bring human a more stable life. When the environment is protected by individuals and governments in every most minor activity, it will become better to sme extent. This contributes to a more secured life where people are able to work more effectively without worrying about pollution and unexpected disastrous natural phenomena. For example, regarding agriculture, farmers may be more assured to plant crops, knowing in advance that climate will be supportive. Consequentl, thanks to human’s prevention against global warming, they themselves are able to enjoy a safer and better life.
To conclude, it is rational that human should not ignore climate change with the thought of living with it for long terms as people may have to suffer from terrifying disasters. Rather, I strongly believe the public should put all efforts to stop, if not minimalize climate change for a safer life to live and work in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 572, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...torms and floods. In fact, according to a research in 2017, if climate change continued at...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, regarding, so, for example, in addition, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02493074792 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62261485356 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576177285319 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3305263724 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.375 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155830767642 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557764637213 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639218962651 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101713038766 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430192940445 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.