Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is believed that some people nowadays are not interested at all in preserving the traditional culture of the country that they live in. In the other hand, some people think that it is necessity to keep the traditional way of living. To the best of my knowledge, both views have points that I am going to discuss.
“Freezing in the past” this is what people say who are persuaded with those traditions is now important for the community. Furthermore, they suppose we should concentrate on our careers and on life rather than wasting time doing insignificant things. For instance, in Egypt when there is a flipped slipper in the room this mean that something bad will happen as it is terrible prediction to the future.
Alternatively, other people imagine that traditions is necessary for civilized nations. Because it strengthens the loyalty to your country. For example, also in Egypt there is a celebration called sham El Nessim approximately all the people draw in eggs. It may look dull. But it is very effective in establishing a good citizen with an enormous amount of belonging and relationship between your soul and your soul.
To sum up, diversity in opinions is useful for us . Those people who consider traditional has no good for their country or region have their points Even so, the others reckon that it is still significant that we keep our traditions also do. from my perspective I suppose that having traditions is very beneficial for the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, so, still, then, even so, for example, for instance, i suppose, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86589077725 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2387423706 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8571428571 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373338485649 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108288935424 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105590122738 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217988046211 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125504539992 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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