Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Imagine this scene, you are in a school building, with only girls, no boys at all, what will you feel? Yes, now there are many discussions about whether we should separate girls and boys when going to school. In my opinion, I agree that boys and girls should attend separate schools for two reasons, it can let both boys and girls get better education, and make both boys and girls be more focused on study.
My first viewpoint is it makes students get better education. A U.S senator says in his book that a lot of researches proves that the methods of teaching that work best for male and female students in mathematics and science are quite different, and therefore the separation of male and female students for single-sex education is conducive to making teaching more suitable for gender differences. Kids with different genders have completely different developmental nodes in their abilities during their growth. Boys are better at reasoning and solving problems, and girls are better at speaking and some details. So, making them learn in one big school is actually difficult to get the best education for very child. For this reason, I believe we should let boys and girls attend separate schools.
My second viewpoint is that separate schools will make students more focused on learning. All the kids and students are juveniles, a lot of them will be falling in love at this sate especially middle school students, it is too early for them, they don't know how to face these feelings and emotions correctly, it’s easy for students to go into the wrong way. This has a bad effect on studying and students themselves. If we separate them, and these can be avoided, so, we should let boys and girls go to separate schools.
To conclude, I believe boys and girls should attend separate schools for a better place to learn, and more concentrated on studying. In order to give more children a better education, we should make boys and girls attend separate schools, this is for the good of students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, second, so, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81213872832 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51446581618 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485549132948 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.147381118 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0666666667 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245501605319 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106053666691 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086847783765 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187751863905 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086524040959 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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