"Over the past three years, there has been a marked increase in cases of 'sidewalk rage,' similar to the irrational anger drivers experience on the road, but instead among sidewalk walkers. The result is an increase in assaults, property damage, and disruptions of normal pedestrian traffic. In order to address this growing problem, the council must ban cell phone use on sidewalks. Not only do people texting or using their phones slow down pedestrian traffic, but they are also more likely to walk into the road or bump into other walkers. Children are especially vulnerable because they are too short to be easily seen. Middletown passed such a ban and not only have they heard no complaints, but the reported incidents of sidewalk crime has gone down significantly."
The petition has so many flaws and wrong assumptions in it. The council must have to identify th eaxct reasons for the increase in side walk rage.
" similar to the irrational anger drivers experience on the road, but instead among sidewalk walkers. The result is an increase in assaults, property damage, and disruptions of normal pedestrian traffic " , in this staement we can clearly see that the argument has base less if any person using mobile got accident the person must be injured not the property. may be by sudeen people arrival on road may be th reason but there is no such evidences to support the assumption that the using mobile is the reason the sitaution is onlt treu when u show the evidence like tarffic camera footage as evidence or by the on spot witness then the assumption has some proofs maybe the centerville roads width are so small or the sidewal space walk place minimal we dont the exact conditions of the road without describing these things it is impossible to to determine the many reasons.
may be some cases comes like people comes to road while using mobile but they must have some grills for gate btween the side walk and road. Because , we can,t prohibit the mobile using even taking huge fine from them. council or govt must build speed beakers in the more side walk ways and awaring about people by the consequeneces of more speed may decreases the cases of accidents and offcourse we should prohibit banning also.
And in the plea we can see that childrens are the major victims on the roads and at the same time they plea saying mobile using are the primary causes the statements is base less completely. Parents must take their children with some care and giving private place to the childrens walking decreases the children victims.
And in the plea they used middletown as an eaxmple may be they worked for them huge mobile usning may be the primary cause for the side walk rage but the conditions may different to the centrevile and there is no evidence that the both towns have same road conditions, police secutiy the example is only be strong when ypu say that the both town has same road conditions and having same rules and having same anger drivers cases then we can apply the ban on mobiles on centerville.
to decrease the cases in the centrevile the counsil most think many aspects to decrease the side walk rages in the centervile the eveidence we discussed above may give you some information but the counsil mist inves
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 28 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 437 350
No. of Characters: 2011 1500
No. of Different Words: 208 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.572 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.602 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.303 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 126 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 93 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 43.7 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 29.438 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.389 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.389 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.21 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 214, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ions of normal pedestrian traffic ' , in this staement we can clearly see tha...
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Line 2, column 370, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: May
...erson must be injured not the property. may be by sudeen people arrival on road may...
^^^
Line 2, column 764, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...the sidewal space walk place minimal we dont the exact conditions of the road withou...
^^^^
Line 2, column 851, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...escribing these things it is impossible to to determine the many reasons. may be som...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: May
...ible to to determine the many reasons. may be some cases comes like people comes t...
^^^
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cases'' or 'case's'?
Suggestion: cases'; case's
...etermine the many reasons. may be some cases comes like people comes to road while u...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e btween the side walk and road. Because , we can,t prohibit the mobile using even...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , t
...the side walk and road. Because , we can,t prohibit the mobile using even taking h...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Council
... using even taking huge fine from them. council or govt must build speed beakers in the...
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Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...nd offcourse we should prohibit banning also. And in the plea we can see that child...
^^^^
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...plea they used middletown as an eaxmple may be they worked for them huge mobile usning...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...ply the ban on mobiles on centerville. to decrease the cases in the centrevile th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.9520958084 139% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 11.1786427146 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 28.8173652695 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 55.5748502994 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 2260.96107784 91% => OK
No of words: 438.0 441.139720559 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68264840183 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33624756521 2.78398813304 84% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 204.123752495 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497716894977 0.468620217663 106% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 705.55239521 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.8473053892 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.48468269 57.8364921388 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.916666667 119.503703932 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5 23.324526521 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 5.70786347227 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138221508989 0.218282227539 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673615289489 0.0743258471296 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104104347507 0.0701772020484 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676669960362 0.128457276422 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560714840394 0.0628817314937 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 14.3799401198 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 48.3550499002 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.197005988 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 12.5979740519 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 98.500998004 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.1389221557 147% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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