Crimes committed by young people are increasing in major cities throughout the world Discuss the causes and how to solve this problem

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Crimes committed by young people are increasing in major cities throughout the world. Discuss the causes and how to solve this problem.

It is true that violent adolescent behavior is on the rise in cities around the world. There are a number of reasons behind this view, and several solutions should be adopted by governments and individuals to improve the situation .
There are two primary reasons why young people commit crimes . One reason is that the parents don't care enough about their children , they ignore their children's behaviour and emotions . This makes the teenager feel abandoned and want to get attention from their parents . Furthermore , they can be affected by their surroundings . For example , in the slums , young people don't have food to eat and live in harsh conditions , so they have to steal and rob others .
Fortunately , several measures can be taken to prevent this problem . The first solution would be for the family and school to be concerned and to educate young people about what constitutes illegal behavior. Parents should regularly encourage , confide in and encourage their children , educate them on positive things in life .
A second measure would be that governments should improve the living conditions of people in difficult places, such as health care , goods , transportation , and politics.
In conclusion , it is clear that there are various reasons why teenagers commit crimes and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20093457944 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70402078303 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584112149533 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5233686778 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167103679575 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680378845584 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660458502501 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936929883934 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400229750967 0.056905535591 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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