You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In some countries, people’s weight tends to increase. Meanwhile, their health and fitness decline. This essay will discuss some of the reasons why these problems have occurred and show some ways to solve this.
In recent years, people have become addicted to fast food because they have no time to eat a meal at home. Like every morning, workers prefer eating a hamburger instead of a meal with rice, meat and vegetables. Fast food has high- fat ingredients so it leads to people’s weight increases very quickly. So, fast food is the first reason which leads to the growth of people’s weight. Another reason is people are full of stress because of their work so they could not take care of their health. In one day they have a lot of things to do related to their work and when they have freetime they choose to take a nap or sleep. The last cause is people are afraid to pay large sums of money to go to the gym. Following the improvements of the economy, every gym center has increased their ticket prices much higher than in the past. It causes users to hesitate to pay for this. Overtime, no one goes to the gym anymore.
On the other hand, people can do something to lose weight and to keep fit. Firstly, They can choose healthy food instead of fast food like salad, vegetables,..etc. Example like in the morning before going to work, people can eat an egg with a dish of salad. It will help their health become better. Secondly, they can spend only 1 hour a day doing yoga or workout because these sports can help them relieve stress and get rid of heart diseases. Finally, they can walk or do some exercises in the park every day if they cannot pay for a gym center’s ticket. In the park they can breathe with fresh air and have a large space for their workout without payment.
In conclusion, people should choose healthy habits to live a better life without being overweight and diseases before they cannot do anything to boost their health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5593220339 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30344325069 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531073446328 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5667338832 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8571428571 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187606443329 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653394697526 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478867901727 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142237975436 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568993207626 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.