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Many people have learned a foreign language in their own country; others have learned a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken. Which is better?

Nowadays, in the age of cross-culture communication, integration and sustainable development of the world, the ability to speak different foreign languages is crucial. In my opinion, the best way to learn nonnative language is studying in the country in which it is spoken.
To begin with, movement ot another country allows a person to change conditions of his / her living. As a result, if all of your surruondings speak in foreign language for you, you will be more succescfull in studying it, mostly in speaking practise. The main point is that your everyday actions will be filled with communications in another language, therefore you will be linked with foreign language closer and achieve high level faster. For instance, when I studied my first foreign language - russian, I usually spent a lot of time in russian-speaking communities and travel to Russia. As a result, my progress was quite good and learning Russian was much easier for me than learning English now, because I have never been in any english-speaking counties.
Secondly, if a person learn foreign language, he / she will probably plan to move in another country in which it is spoken and it is very important to be more prepared for life in different country in advance in order to not waste a lot of time on adaptation. Therefore, change of residence while you do not end studying langugage also allows you to save more time on adjustment, because you can combine process of adaptation and learning. For instance, my friend planned to move to Israel a few years ago. Given this movement he strated to study Hebrew, so he can feel more comfortable when he will be travelled. Nowadays, he is in Israel and he is going to apply in Technion, but he still does not master Hebrew. As a result, by the time of admission he will have been more adapted and prepered for independent life in another county.
In conslusion, I strongly believe that learning language in the country where it is spoken is the best way of mastering it. This is because your progress will be more quickly and successful, furthermore, you will be more adjusted for living in another country and do not waste a lot of time on adoptation if you would moved as soos as you learned the language.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 318, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'move'
Suggestion: move
... lot of time on adoptation if you would moved as soos as you learned the language.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79533678756 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89058975806 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492227979275 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.544759406 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.4 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7333333333 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232884781573 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929479705192 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929026276408 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180364897709 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733860478256 0.0645574589148 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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