Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
The world is in jeopardy because of climate change. It is now undeniable that one of the biggest problems this era is grappling with is global warming. Although a number of factors can contribute to this worldwide issue, governments and people can take several steps to address, or at least alleviate, it.
To begin with, there are several reasons why global warming can be resulted in, one of which is greenhouse gases released from cars. It is now common to see people using their private cars as their primary mode of transportation. This, in turn, can add carbon dioxide to the atmosphere, causing over warming in the long run. Another driving factor behind global warming is combustion of fossil fuels like coal, oil and natural gas. Not only do people, but also factories often use these non-renewable energy sources, which are the biggest contributors of the pollution, for energy production, increasing the levels of warming on the Earth.
However, there are several ways in which global warming can be reduced. Firstly, governing bodies should improve public transportation in order to incentivize people to utilize it instead of their private vehicles, which can lessen the pollution. In terms of people, they ought to use public transport or eco-friendly cars, like Elon Musk’s Tesla so that they can diminish CO2 gases which emit from their cars. Secondly, governments need to promote and encourage the use of such renewable energy sources as solar or wind power to mitigate one of the largest contributors of global warming, while individuals can also support the transition by adopting renewable energy at home, such as installing solar panels or using green energy providers.
In conclusion, even though carbon dioxide released from cars and burning fossil fuels are the direct results of global warming, it can be tackled with enhancing and using more public transportation as opposed to private cars, and encouraging the usage of renewable energy sources in households and factories.
- the graph below shows predictions about the numbers of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this the case Do you think this is a positive or negative development 89
- Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue 73
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities Others however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required Discuss both these views and give your 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, while, at least, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20987654321 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74442250759 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.5716113802 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.846153846 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204660134939 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817096270891 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515149705568 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128727843029 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381252700444 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.