Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is agrued that a various of complex problem has made for individuals life and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology. From my point of view, i mostly disagree with this notion because of its drawbacks for the development of the nation. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the international world and with the appearance of modern innovation such as internet, technology is hugely significant for the nation improment. Not only does technology provide numerous valuable knowledge such as benefit information and strength experience, but also diffical trouble and challenges can be done by new innovation such as automatic robots. Furthermore, economic background of their country can be improved graduately by the helpful of technology. To illustrate, there was a vurvey by Climeber Son, the famous scientist and professor which was about the success of europian nation which use modern technology for development. The statistic showed that nearly every country has got a plenty of achevement.
However, we can not negate the demerits of technology for the individual. A lot of civil worker have been replaced by technology, increasing the percentage of unemployment, and also socioeconomic will be rose significantly in the social. Moreover, many government take advantage from this revenus for their own profit, harmful influence will be led by this action, ruducing the nation development.
To conclude, by my agrument from the essay that i totally disagree with this statement since it has a various of possitive aspect for individuals. The state need to have bright plans for their nation improvement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05537920019 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3280047452 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119095525549 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438967488155 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737993725813 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073893247963 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620572601567 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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