As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is agrued that as well as making revenu, great companies also have social responsibilities. From my point of view, i mostly agree with this notion because of its benefits and pratical to the individual life. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the international world and with the appearence of modern technology that citizens are just concentrate in their occupation, so work moral is hugely significant for the society. Not only does social responsibilities is the motivation and inspiration of each people, improving the quantity and productivity of their business, but also numerous quality production will be provide to the customer. Furthermore, companies can be gave all of believe from the citizen which help them more developed and popular. To illustrate, there was a vurvey by Macker Ross, The famous scientist and professor which was about the success of business in New York which have social responsibilities. The statistic showed that nearly every companies has got a various of achevement in their development.
However, we can not negate the fact in the modern life that there were a plenty of companies which has been established just to make money. producting bad quality food and production which have drawback affection for the young generation, lacking their immune systerm. Morover, some managers take advantage from this problem for their own profits. Harmful influence will be led by this action.
To conclude, by my agrument from the essay that i totally agree with this statement since it have positive aspect for the individual. The manager of large business need to have their own consciousness for the nation improvement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24264705882 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98695983665 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599264705882 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0741924183 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160713824312 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542398290718 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709472697507 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103571737188 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396101171742 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.