Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
Cow flu is a condition that can rapidly spread. It does not just affect the herd but the human respiratory system is also prone to this disease. It is cause by a virus and thus is not easy to curb or manage. The disease severely affects the cows causing lumps on their skin making them unsuitable for milking and beef production. In humans it affects the respiratory system causing influenza.
Since the cows are the livelihood of the people who herd them, the disease completely takes away their livelihood. And as if that wasn't enough, they also fall sick. The disease also widely spreads into the surrounding areas. In some extreme cases, be it the weak immune system, it leads to the death of a person.
The solution for this remains the inoculations against cow flu. Inoculations are weakened virus which induced in our body to develop an immunity against it. Since the virus is weakened fighting against it becomes easier for the body. After the inoculations the person may not even have any side effects or may suffer from minor effects like fever. In most cases this has been seen as an effective solution and as a precautionary measure for the future to overcome the cow flu if this disease was to breakout.
But in some cases inoculations has been found to be rather dangerous owing to the small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculation. This remains a concern and thus the author says that they cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be administered routinely. It is a valid point of view. But to have some truth to the sentence the author should have provided a statistics or some evidence showing how dangerous the inoculation is. The the medical history of the patients how have previously died owing to the the inoculations should be taken into account. Without a valid justifiable statistics it may be improper to do so. Al so the rate of the people died due to the outbreak of this disease and the people who died due to inoculations should be compared to get a clearer view of what is the best way to ahead with, making the inoculations available routinely or whether they are harmful.
The opinions of the people who actually suffer from this issue should be taken into account. If not routinely the vaccines should still be made accessible and available to the people who want to use it. And till then a better solution should be worked upon.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...s away their livelihood. And as if that wasnt enough, they also fall sick. The diseas...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...he death of a person. The solution for this remains the inoculations against cow fl...
^^^^
Line 4, column 458, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: The
...owing how dangerous the inoculation is. The the medical history of the patients how hav...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 458, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'The' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: The; The
...owing how dangerous the inoculation is. The the medical history of the patients how hav...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 532, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ients how have previously died owing to the the inoculations should be taken into accou...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 532, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ients how have previously died owing to the the inoculations should be taken into accou...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, still, then, thus, as to, as a result, in most cases, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 2260.96107784 87% => OK
No of words: 423.0 441.139720559 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67139479905 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60473967591 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 204.123752495 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479905437352 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 705.55239521 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 19.7664670659 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.4888981658 57.8364921388 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3333333333 119.503703932 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 23.324526521 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.20833333333 5.70786347227 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 6.88822355289 218% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300180806189 0.218282227539 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765132818223 0.0743258471296 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732860066082 0.0701772020484 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140358471659 0.128457276422 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089305973006 0.0628817314937 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.3799401198 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.3550499002 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.197005988 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.5979740519 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 98.500998004 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...s away their livelihood. And as if that wasnt enough, they also fall sick. The diseas...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...he death of a person. The solution for this remains the inoculations against cow fl...
^^^^
Line 4, column 458, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: The
...owing how dangerous the inoculation is. The the medical history of the patients how hav...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 458, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'The' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: The; The
...owing how dangerous the inoculation is. The the medical history of the patients how hav...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 532, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ients how have previously died owing to the the inoculations should be taken into accou...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 532, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ients how have previously died owing to the the inoculations should be taken into accou...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, still, then, thus, as to, as a result, in most cases, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 2260.96107784 87% => OK
No of words: 423.0 441.139720559 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67139479905 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60473967591 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 204.123752495 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479905437352 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 705.55239521 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 19.7664670659 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.4888981658 57.8364921388 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3333333333 119.503703932 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 23.324526521 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.20833333333 5.70786347227 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 6.88822355289 218% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300180806189 0.218282227539 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765132818223 0.0743258471296 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732860066082 0.0701772020484 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140358471659 0.128457276422 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089305973006 0.0628817314937 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.3799401198 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.3550499002 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.197005988 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.5979740519 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 98.500998004 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.