A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
education is consider as an important element to lead the future generation in the way of prosperity. there are no confusion that every student in the any country require the same curriculum. it will be very much problematic approach for the authority to decide in which measurement should apply for a learner to intregrate them. But in a same curriculum the teacher can easily adopt the system and judge the young learners.
Firstly, the whole procedure should be conducted by an expert who is actully acknowledged the error in the schooling process. A basic knowledge about algebra, probability, statistics and grammatical english are much more needed in the further studies. A natural learning system provides this all to acquire the limit of analytical thinking. In the United States of America, the childs are frequently adviced to gain session in their class about computing, mathematical issue and other literature abilities. From the childhood they can separately consume the adaptability of a modern technology and science. All of the educational institute maintain a definite rules for all of the citizen. Otherwise, if a student face some trouble in learning because for the environment and social purspect he or she can easily change the school.
Secondly, there are abundant factors of evaluating a learner. The decision might be taken to change the full judgementing system, the students will not be able to prove themselves. A great scientist, Stephen Hawking, Once upon atime quotes " Behind every exceptional person, there is an exceptional teacher". The mentor's policy should be likely applicable for all of the students. In the anicent time, there are huge barrier to committed a good education process. Many educational expert are taking account to ensure that any horrible situation should be reduced by taking some steps.
So, it is clear if we do not able to maintain a level playing field in a sports the result may not be accurate or the players achievement might be questioned.The government would differ the fault of the national curriculum which will be a good decision. And give chances to all of the young citizens a better policy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Education
education is consider as an important element to ...
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education is consider as an important element to lead the fut...
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...re generation in the way of prosperity. there are no confusion that every student in ...
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...ny country require the same curriculum. it will be very much problematic approach ...
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...ity of a modern technology and science. All of the educational institute maintain a defini...
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Suggestion: rule
...ucational institute maintain a definite rules for all of the citizen. Otherwise, if a...
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...institute maintain a definite rules for all of the citizen. Otherwise, if a student face s...
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Suggestion: mentors'; mentor's
...re is an exceptional teacher'. The mentors policy should be likely applicable for ...
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...ts. In the anicent time, there are huge barrier to committed a good education process. ...
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...le to maintain a level playing field in a sports the result may not be accurate or the p...
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...be a good decision. And give chances to all of the young citizens a better policy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 353.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16430594901 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91859227535 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586402266289 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2847301832 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9473684211 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5789473684 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63157894737 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137853818576 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390374956799 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397514696431 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866002006716 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378688004445 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.