Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
educational institute have the responsibility to dissuade the students from pursuing the fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed. many young learners consist the possibility of taking a wrong decision in the premature age. I strongly support the statenment because there are several risk to see oneself in a lower position of career.
Firstly, The learning process of a child is called the most vital period of life. In this stage, he/she would be moulded how we tend to give the shape of their intelectual abilities and analytical thinking capabilities. Stephen Hawkin, a great scientist of all time once quotes that "Behind every exceptional person, there is an exceptional teacher" in where we mostly understand the value of the mentors. A good number of learners make their own purspective and goal without knowing the important and disadvantageous side of any decision. As a result they may face irregularities of success and fall of confidence. Avarge people in our society understood that a unique thinking does not help anyone in a conducive way.
Secondly, the main intention of one's is not only make money by their knowledge but also contribute to the prosperity and economical development. In the movie "Dead Poet society" we experienced how the influence of a teacher can happen a lot change in their whole thinking procedure. it is notably claimed by many sociologist the social behaviour of a person mostly depended on the earning intellilectual properties not on the physical. In the modern world, we are blessed with the scientific and technological advancement. From urban area to rural, this preceding show also be regarded as the honor of the passionate scientist, astrologist, biologist. The student always folow their dream.
Additionally, taking decision neglecting the other factor is recognized as harmful as suicidal attempt. The educational and learning center might get in touch with the parents to talk and discuss about the improvement of the socializing elements of a human. The session could be accepted in apositivee manner hopefully. The matter is highly recommended that an error might be more imapctfully drive in the hell.
So, it is much clear that the instituional education and mentors should be careful about their students in any decision making. The matter of regret that a huge number of pupil do not consider this problem as a serious one. The government should also aware through the mainstrem media and other sessional workshop to reduce this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2122.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 406.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22660098522 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04264464368 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605911330049 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3111611134 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.4545454545 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13636363636 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134649104 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406996246423 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131751156238 0.0758088955206 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858106008871 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11785806165 0.0667264976115 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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