A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The process of how to educate a nation is of paramount importance. A country can take different approaches on how to teach their young. The statement argues that the same national curriculum be used until a student enter college, that is, until high school. I mostly disagree with this position and believe that a nation should allow schools and high schools to adapt and create curriculum according to their and students’ requirements.
First of all, students can benefit from a well-developed standardized curriculum that addresses all the fundamental subjects. Subjects such as math, science, language, etc are essential throughout an individual's life. Even if a student chooses say art as their major in college, they will need to do their taxes where mathematics comes in handy. Likewise, they will have to issue letters in government organization where language comes in handy. In this way, a standardized curriculum will ensure that a student foundation knowledge to be a functional part of the society is covered.
However, standardized curriculum falls short when it comes to effectively teaching a student. Every student is different and learns differently. To illustrate, say a middle school student Alan has a hard time learning by reading text books but learns easily if taught through entertaining videos. A standardized curriculum cannot account for students like Alan and allow for various ways to teach because it is standardized. If teachers are allowed to adapt the curriculum according to needs of a student, they can effectively teach every student. Additionally, There is also the matter of teacher's style of teaching. A national curriculum will limit teachers to use only the specified method of teaching which is narrow and restricting.
Secondly, a standardized course will teach students subjects that they may never use in their future career so the time and effort invested in learning these subjects is wasted and could otherwise be used effectively were they allowed to specialize and adapt according to their interest earlier on. A student who specializes earlier on will have more knowledge and is more ready for their college studies than a student who doesn't and has a more general knowledge. So, it makes sense to save student's time and allow for focused studies earlier on through adaptive curriculum rather than a standardized one.
In conclusion, educating a nation is a convoluted and important topic. While it may seem like a good idea to enforce a nationwide standardized curriculum to ensure the bases of all students are covered, it is a flawed approach. Whereas, an adaptive curriculum which guarantee's effective learning, is not restricting to teachers and saves students time and effort by allowing to specialize early is the better approach.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 200, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...nguage, etc are essential throughout an individuals life. Even if a student chooses say art...
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Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to say'
Suggestion: to say
...viduals life. Even if a student chooses say art as their major in college, they wil...
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Line 4, column 424, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...heir college studies than a student who doesnt and has a more general knowledge. So, i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2349.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 446.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2668161435 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99752305798 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497757847534 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 740.7 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1920930245 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.772727273 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302870845646 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090161557936 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709911817945 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172463820236 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612855538009 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.