People eat more processed food than they did in the past. Why is this? What are the effects of this?
There is a well-established fact that in contemporary times, the trend of consuming fast food has increased more than ever before compared to previous periods. The result of this rise may come from people not having enough time to prepare for an actual meal, and the outcome of such a trend may harm their physical health.
To begin with, people in recent years have faced more busyness from their work more than they used to be, which causes them lack of time to cook and use processed cuisine instead. After the presence of the Covid-19 pandemic, the job market is more competitive than ever before, which means that workers should work harder to get more jobs done. If they cannot do that, they will be laid off and replaced by a more productive employee. It is these situations that humans have to heighten their efforts while working and do not have adequate time to enjoy their meals. For instance, over 30% of students who are between the ages of 18 and 22 in Vietnam have to work several jobs at the same time in order to enhance their financial situations, and they actually see convenience food is an appropriate choice for them at the current time. This is the clearest answer to the question that why people tend to consume more pre-packaged food more than ever before.
Consequently, due to the increase in the use of processed food, workers’ health may be affected negatively. It is undeniable that eating this type of food will cause obesity as users absorb so many fats into their bodies. Also, no one can ensure the quality of the convenience meals as the ingredients are not fresh at all, and someone can purchase some out-of-date products which is harmful for their fitness. All of these reasons seem to have so many bad influences on humans’ health and stomachs.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that the trend of using fast food has increased over these years compared to the previous days because employees spend less time in their kitchen to prepare meals. This rising trend may show consequence in harmful impacts on their health
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, consequently, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77374301676 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50744187461 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550279329609 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6446705297 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.071428571 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236708495696 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886747923563 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819119683968 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133443011133 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598577897572 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.