Claim: While boredom is often expressed with a sense of self-satisfaction, it
should really be a source of embarrassment.
Reason: Boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self-motivation.
The claim has aptly called the boredom a source of embarrassment as this source is surely arises from lack of imagination and self-motivation. The correctness of the claim lies in the reasons like letharegy and laid-back approach, getting influenced by other’s thoughts and physical inactivity. These attributes restricts the mind’s ability to think creative and frustrates the motivation of a person. All these reasons are discussed and analysed below in detail.
First of all, to describe boredom with self satisfaction is a self destructive thing one does to his personality. One such cause of boredom is lethargy and laid-back approach of a person. The reluctancy of doing something promptly with enthusiasm deteriorates the self-motivation and this in-turn force the mind to become satisfied with such reluctancy. Such a person starts to find evasive reasons to get self-satisfied. But being lethargic is an embarrassment. For example, if an extra player of a fifa team gets satisfied just by the fact that he is in the team and feels the false pleasure of achievement, then he will never improve and ultimately gets embarrassed by not getting selected in the playing squad.
Second reason to support the claim is the influence the others have on a person’s mindset. Even if a person is imaginative, proactive and self-motivated to do some task, the thoughts of other may bar him from doing the task he was about to execute. For example, if a person starts writing a book on a topic of science for general public, someone might convey his negative thoughts to the writer that many books on similar topic and genre have already been written. This will collapse the self-esteem and motivation of the person who was, one may never know, about to write a book which might have become very famous among the readers.
And finally, boredom is also derive its source from physical inactivity and the physically inactive person always lives in a fool’s paradise that he is fit and he doesn’t need any exercise. This is in itself is a great embarrasment for that person because people around him is more active and hence more creative and productive. For example, playing a fifa on computer cannot be compared with actual fifa on the grounds and thus the mundane computer game ultimately forces the person to get bored and restricting all his self-motivation. This is only because that person is in self-denial mode and he is fully satisfied with him even though he is marred with boredom.
In a nutshell, boredom is actually a source of embarrassment for a person rather than a self-satisfying concept. Above analysis clearly shows how various aspects kill the imaginative power and destroy the enthusiasm and motivation of a person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 313, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'restrict'.
Suggestion: restrict
...d physical inactivity. These attributes restricts the mind’s ability to think creative an...
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Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...riting a book on a topic of science for general public, someone might convey his negative thou...
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Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'derived'.
Suggestion: derived
...eaders. And finally, boredom is also derive its source from physical inactivity and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, hence, if, may, second, so, then, thus, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2298.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 454.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06167400881 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98147098019 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513215859031 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8884032051 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.9 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292105598111 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987787885846 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967879326111 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182198326804 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067738330329 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.