Some people think the manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, there has been an amount of waste products from over-packed products. Some people presume that products with fewer packaged should sold by manufactured and shopping malls, on the other hand some people argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging. This essay will discuss both sides, and talk about the main themes of the discussion.
Firstly, some people decide to not buy any over-packed product for some reasons. To clarify, by not purchasing products with many packaging, shopping mall and advertising industry will change their plans in packaging products to produced it fewer packaging. But why companies and shopping malls over-packaging products? Due to phycological reasons because some industries made their products with eye-catching packages to attract customers attention to purchasing their product. For another example, over-packaging is hazardous for environment due to using plastic and some of material that it hardly decomposes, so manufactures and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products.
On the other hand, another group of people argue that shopping malls and industries should take responsibility to reduce their packaging ways by selling fewer packaged product. Governments should be managing waste products in companies and shopping malls and, they should put legal limits on packaging and be strict to pursue manufactures to sell products with fewer packaging. Moreover, they need to raise public awareness about over-packaging and its harmful effects.
Overall, manufactures and shopping mall only use plans that is help them to selling their product successfully, without care about waste products or environmental risks. In my opinion, it is a must for manufactures and packaging industries to take responsibility in their packaging products and sell it with fewer packages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires base form of the verb: 'sell'.
Suggestion: sell
...hat products with fewer packaged should sold by manufactured and shopping malls, on ...
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Line 1, column 385, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bout the main themes of the discussion. Firstly, some people decide to not buy a...
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Line 2, column 126, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun packaging seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much packaging', 'a good deal of packaging'.
Suggestion: much packaging; a good deal of packaging
...larify, by not purchasing products with many packaging, shopping mall and advertising industry...
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Line 4, column 324, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oducts and sell it with fewer packages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65836298932 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01095798047 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501779359431 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7127935597 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.307692308 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.562925456351 0.244688304435 230% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.230021587003 0.084324248473 273% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146881469486 0.0667982634062 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.39754990606 0.151304729494 263% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605468231866 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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