Many young people nowadays are imitating celebrates in sports has good or bad
The importance of imitating sport celebrities by young ones, which was always been debatable has now upsurge a lot of argument in favor and against it, thus it has become more controversial. The substantial influence of imitating celebrities has sparked controversy over the potential of this trend in an integral part of society in recent years. It can be agreed that the upsides of imitating sport celebrities are instrumental indeed. However it has some various drawbacks as well. This essay will be elaborate on both assertions and provide a well-weighted conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why imitating celebrities by youth is unreservedly salient, but the most conspicuous one lies the fact that it motivate the youth to perform same activities as their celebrities. Therefore it is vital time to appreciate the significance of the imitating celebrities by the youth for the overall amelioration of society. Not only this if they will imitate sport celebrities they will also physically and mentally healthy due to which they can positively contribute towards society.
Furthermore, imitating celebrities also brings equality among individuals by promoting the feelings of unity. It also helps to resolve conflicts between nations, thus this plays important role.
The above mentioned dissertation illustrates the importance of imitating sport celebrities by youngsters and its impacts. While it is evident it has various benefits, although it may leads to negative impacts but neglecting its advantages would be considered as folly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54166666667 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14509097201 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3726362647 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.833333333 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237424572605 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871280298786 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711271986462 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133465180746 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484485297057 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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