spending money by government on basic needs
The importance of spending money by government on basic needs which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. this essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to be a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that government should invest money in improving medical technology consequently, they should indulge in upgrading their education sector. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that because it is considered as the base of overall development of particular country. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoints, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effects is that government should spend as much money as medical development. Hence, it is apparent why many are against of this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the drawbacks of some people think that this money should spent on more basic needs are indeed too great too ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20535714286 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76847631323 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602678571429 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0612019563 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.6 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237352441045 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811125590235 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114962776106 0.071462118173 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145039224531 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434670393561 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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