Some People think that team sports prepare children for work life. Discuss both sides and give your opinion
There is a school of thought that believes that group sports don’t help children to get ready for a career. I think that it is the opposite because such games help in not only learning life lessons but also in entertainingly developing specific skills.
One of the significant reasons I believe is that such activities impart skills, like leadership and cooperativeness, which lays the foundation of success in a profession. These skills act as a foundation because, if a person desires to scale up the career, the person is required to work in a team when the said skills become vital. For instance, corporations understand the need for team building activities and organize sports activities over the weekend. In addition, there has been no doubt even among scholars that group activities help to know about the weaknesses of team members and teaches how to handle them to achieve the goal. Basically, children learn to adapt according to the situation.
Despite the proven belief, there are people who argue on this by stating that sports activities are meant for just the entertainment, whereas professional life poses separate challenges altogether. Considering the said hypothesis, as a fact, many parents do not allow their children to participate. In a recent survey done by the sports board in India, it was discovered many parents believe that team sports develop negative habits, such as enviousness, as well. Further, these people also argue that professional life involves much larger issues, like politics, which no sports can help to face.
To conclude, although team sports help children to learn the necessary skills required in corporate life, some people consider them useless. There is no doubt in my mind that group games make children ready for work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, whereas, for instance, i think, in addition, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16955017301 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83037368448 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567474048443 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7509114228 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.923076923 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255668987986 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897537068697 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561833006878 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170288854302 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585064831631 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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