In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
We are living in an unfair world where everyone earns according to one's mental ability and skills, therefore; some people earn high salaries, whereas others cannot earn that much money. Everyone should earn his hard work, skill, and abilities, so the government should not interfere in this matter. According to my point of view, the government should give incentives to low-income persons but the government should not put restrictions on high-income persons.
High salaries are just like a motivation for hard worker and genius minds, this is why they give their hundred percent to achieve any reward. On the other side of the picture, if the government should not permit to go beyond a certain level then it will discourage these workers to work less as they will get as much as salaries as others get who do nothing. Therefore, this is not a good idea.
Moreover, high salary promotes the development and innovation in any department. People put their hundred percent to achieve a high salary with incentives, this will enhance their creative abilities. With the restrictions of government, it will become less attractive to people and they will not feel happy to give innovative ideas. It is better for the government to not interfere in this matter but the government can subsidize the low-income people. The government can put a certain tax on the rich and give this money to poor income people.
In the end, we will sum up the arguments that the government should not decide the certain level of salary for all people because it will take away good ideas and creativeness of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'permit' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
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Line 2, column 292, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92565055762 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65030473723 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513011152416 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5254801339 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.416666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319038361743 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120259055881 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031918002513 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201960806113 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00797847349501 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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