discuss about public transport and private transport
In recent years, using public transport or private vehicle is becoming a controversial issues. In my opinion, both of means have many benefits but I recommend about private vehicles because of some reason in my below essay.
On the one hands, public transport brings a numerous advantages. Firstly, it has a reasonable price what most citizens can afford because it is subsidized by government. Students and low-income workers are the ones who regular user them, they just spend about 200-300.000 dong per month for their transportation instead of millions of dong by private means. Secondly, if you are environmentally conscious, using public transport is more environmentally-friendly. Actually, global warming is rising rapidly due to many reasons and emissions from vehicles are one of the main causes, so public transport not only contributes greatly to decreasing traffic jams, but also help go down air pollution.
On the other hands, it cannot denied the advantages of using private means. If individuals usually need to wait for some minutes to catch a bus or train, using private vehicles could save times because of superior speed. In some crowded cities, buses meet difficulties moving among variety of vehicles, so people have to wait for quite a long time before the buses come, which annoy them and cause them to be late for schools or work, which private means can solve. Another, cars offer a lot of comfort and convenience for user special when they travel or move long distance. For example, when a citizen go to business in another city, using cars will help them more active about time, work and health because of not suffer from car sick like using public transport.
In conclusion, despite certain benefits of public transport, I gravitate towards the use of private vehicle due to their superior speed and comfort.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1059602649 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8703166376 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609271523179 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5372895679 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.615384615 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322397195843 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129974164119 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983182093569 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233166859489 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668869506423 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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