It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Recently, it's widely belief that some people had talents in some fields when they were born. Although I agree that some people show their incredible abilities when they were a child, I assume that any child can become success if they are taught and study, practice hard.
On the one hand, some people are born with certain aptitudes, which are advantages for them to foster better than other. A two year old child can master in difficult mathematics theory which is impossible for a child in such young age. Or some children display talents in art such as sport, painting or music in yong age without professional training. A clear example is Mozart, who had talent in compossing music since his early childhood.
On the other hand, through trainning and practising, any children can aquire skills that needed to be successful. Many parents create favorable conditions for their children to improve his interest since he was a little boy. This will help kids have good foundation and proper guidance to achieve goals. Besides, without hard-working, insistent practising, they will not become profession and master in any field. For example, many talented people such as Edison, Leonardo da Vinci,.. if they did not study and work hard, they would have not be take great achievements. Therefore, if having good training conditions and practising hard, any child will be successful in the future.
In conclusion, although some people have talents since they were born, it seems to me that extreme practice and dedication can take people far beyond what mere natural aptitude alone can do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04562737643 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54679633085 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61216730038 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8238962231 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7857142857 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302359391607 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990435818829 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510866816356 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176916711003 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04857594798 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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