Some people believe that it is best to accept a situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Opinions are divided as to it is a best way to take advantage of a bad situation in their life, such as working with a job did not appropriate with your passion or with low salary. Many argue that it is a good chance to develop yourself in many aspects in the future. Other hold that it is great when have a chance to deal with this situation to improve yourself. In this essay, I will discuss both these views and show why I am in favour of the latter.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some believe that a job which did not satisfy or have low salary could not help us to improve in the future. People are highly recommended to follow their passion and high salary when choosing a job. Because it is the easiest way to help them feel comfort with themselves at present. For instance, a person choosing a job always prefer a job with big income to improve their life quickly and always trying to do better to develop themselves. However, when decide it you could not have a chance to deal with a challenge would help you earn a huge experience in the future.
On the other hand, I am convinced that the more difficult job you face the more benefits help you to improve yourself in the future. One reason for this is that with a job small job but not only can could support you to learn new knowledge but also a playing a vital role in your life. For example, when a person accepted with a small job come along with low income but it is good for you when you have time to learn something new or could help you adapt with different working environment. Another reason in favour of taking time to deal with a new challenge to work in a place which did not fit with your ability but will help you find out what kind job you really want for your future career.
In conclusion, there are good reasons to believe that facing a job which unsatisfied or have low salary could be very risky in the future. However, it is my view that it is the best way to have experienced with that kind of job that not only help you improve yourself but also will be a huge achievement in your life.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
Opinions are divided as to it is a best way to take advantage of a bad sit...
^
Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended following'.
Suggestion: recommended following
...mprove in the future. People are highly recommended to follow their passion and high salary when choo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 242, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...on and high salary when choosing a job. Because it is the easiest way to help them feel...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.225 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28756967107 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.41 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.9686058668 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174655591815 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685574368161 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453083097846 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12438470324 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585897092143 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 12.4159519038 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
Opinions are divided as to it is a best way to take advantage of a bad sit...
^
Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended following'.
Suggestion: recommended following
...mprove in the future. People are highly recommended to follow their passion and high salary when choo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 242, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...on and high salary when choosing a job. Because it is the easiest way to help them feel...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.225 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28756967107 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.41 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.9686058668 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174655591815 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685574368161 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453083097846 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12438470324 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585897092143 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 12.4159519038 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.