Fewer young people do farming work in rural areas. Why? Should young people be encouraged to do farming work?
It is true that the number of young people doing farm work in the countryside is small . There are a number of reasons behind this view, and we should raise their spirits to do farming work .
There are two primary reasons why teenagers do not want to work on farms. One reason is that they think working on a farm is not only hard- working but also not enough money to live on. They see their parents have to work from early morning to late afternoon, although the weather is not good . In Vietnam, for example, the weather is tropical and almost beach-like. During the rain season, they often cope with many storms, causing floods that destroy crops . Furthermore, they are attracted to crowded places and modern facilities . In urban areas , they can earn more money and have more time to relax with friends of the same age .
On the other hand , governments and individuals should create conditions for young people to do farm work due to a lack of labour in this industry . The governments adopt the politicians to improve the quality of farmers' lives, supply good seeds and train farmers about technology or organic methods that increase productivity and protect the environment.
In conclusion , it is clear that there are various reasons why young people do not like doing farming in the countryside and the authorities should encourage them to do farming work .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7731092437 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51608612819 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567226890756 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.074893831 49.4020404114 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.222222222 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.476583133722 0.244688304435 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182964986642 0.084324248473 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171155546528 0.0667982634062 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.34748003739 0.151304729494 230% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172836906536 0.056905535591 304% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ng farm work in the countryside is small . There are a number of reasons behind th...
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Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d raise their spirits to do farming work . There are two primary reasons why tee...
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Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...raise their spirits to do farming work . There are two primary reasons why teenag...
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Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ernoon, although the weather is not good . In Vietnam, for example, the weather is...
^^
Line 2, column 459, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...torms, causing floods that destroy crops . Furthermore, they are attracted to crow...
^^
Line 2, column 533, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... to crowded places and modern facilities . In urban areas , they can earn more mon...
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Line 2, column 550, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s and modern facilities . In urban areas , they can earn more money and have more ...
^^
Line 2, column 634, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...me to relax with friends of the same age . On the other hand , governments and i...
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Line 2, column 636, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to relax with friends of the same age . On the other hand , governments and indi...
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Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ds of the same age . On the other hand , governments and individuals should crea...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
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...due to a lack of labour in this industry . The governments adopt the politicians t...
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Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...roductivity and protect the environment. In conclusion , it is clear that there a...
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Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...protect the environment. In conclusion , it is clear that there are various reas...
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Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...should encourage them to do farming work .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7731092437 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51608612819 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567226890756 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.074893831 49.4020404114 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.222222222 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.476583133722 0.244688304435 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182964986642 0.084324248473 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171155546528 0.0667982634062 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.34748003739 0.151304729494 230% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172836906536 0.056905535591 304% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.