Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss
of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more
important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
As paragraph describes, few people suggest that major environmental issue in current scenario is extinct of various defined species of plants and animals, Whereas on other hand auxiliary had different thoughts that there are number of important environmental problems. Individuals who present the topic of extinction have evidence and research to prove the statement they have made. Others telling about necessary conflicts like tsunami, earthquakes which considered as extremely dangerous.
Researchers have gained the evidence that some special organisms are going exterminated from the globe. These are types that will help nature to remain constant and improves in growth. The presence of such things have contributed mankind in various ways by preventing natural disasters. For example, Mangrove forests help in prevention of high tides moving towards city. In a survey conducted by the " World care organization of animals " revealed that lessen the number of plants and animals result in disruption of life cycle on earth.
The activists state that there are many important issues than what researchers have commented. In todays time global warming is a environmental issue caused by industries releasing of harmful gas and dumping waste into water bodies resulting in health diseases. Earthquakes are something unavoidable where one high magnitude hit vanishes majority of the population. In recent times " BBC " has published that japan had a earthquake of magnitude 3.2 and it killed more than 30% of citizens.
In conclusion, I pass a statement that agrees with activist who commented on there are different major problems for environment than the extinction of some sort of plants and animals. Further, loss in species can be recovered if there is advancement in technology, Whereas preventing the human beings from extinct is our responsibility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55555555556 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91425164568 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635416666667 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8239758693 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.285714286 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164702383181 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043565979955 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449833965071 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908762021772 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300320278494 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.