Paleo diets, in which one eats how early hominids (human ancestors) did, are becoming increasingly popular. Proponents claim our bodies evolved to eat these types of food, especially bone broth, a soup made by cooking animal bones for several hours. They believe it has many health-promoting nutrients, such as cartilage, which can heal our joints, and chondroitin, which promotes nerve regeneration. Skeptics point out that ingested cartilage can’t replenish cartilage in your knees or elbows and ingested chondroitin doesn’t make our brains any healthier. Yet, there is strong anecdotal evidence that people who consume bone broth have fewer metabolic and inflammatory diseases than those who don’t. Therefore, ancient humans knew something about our physiology that we don’t, and that by emulating the way they ate, we can cure many chronic illnesses.
The passage presents an argument that claims Paleo diets to be a cure for many of our ailments but also its opposing views. Although it mentions quite a few health benefits it fails to support them with any scientific evidence. Further, it fails to take into account that humans have evolved and today's humans suffer from various diseases that didn't take exist in the past. Lastly, there is an assumed cause and effect between the food eaten and diseases cured which isn't necessarily true.
Firstly the passage talks about anecdotal evidence rather than scientific evidence. The passage talks about how cartilage can heal our joints and chondroitin can promote nerve regeneration. Both proposing and opposing views have been presented but no evidence to support these claims has been made. These are just observations that a select group in a select region seems to have made. This group of people could just be an outlier as no numbers or graphs have been presented.
Secondly, the passage fails to take into account the differences between today's worlds from that one hominid lived in. Today's generation lives a sedentary life where our main concern is earning money rather than surviving as was the case in the past. Today's human isn't as physically active and thus may suffer from different chronic diseases for which the Paleo diet will be of no help. Further global warming has changed today's world and the components of today's Paleo diet may not consist of all the required nutrients to help us the same way it helped the hominids.
Lastly the passage only talks about food and how Paleo diet is helping those with chronic diseases. However it is entirely possible that this diet isn't the cause of prevention of these diseases. Today's world is suffering from a lot more pollution that could affect our bodies in totally different ways and different diseases. Further just as humans have evolved, so have the bacteria which have become stronger and more potent. For example, the outbreak of covid affected everyone equally irrespective of their diets. In such a scenario, medicines and vaccines played a much more crucial role in fighting the disease.
To end this argument I would like that state that this passage tries to draw a correlation between chronic illness and the Paleo diet but what we really should be looking into for validating the argument is whether the Paleo diet has a causation factor to curing our ailments. We should further try to see if the time frame has had any effect and conduct more scientific research into the same.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r ailments but also its opposing views. Although it mentions quite a few health benefits...
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Line 1, column 345, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...umans suffer from various diseases that didnt take exist in the past. Lastly, there i...
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Line 1, column 468, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...the food eaten and diseases cured which isnt necessarily true. Firstly the passag...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
... was the case in the past. Todays human isnt as physically active and thus may suffe...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...is helping those with chronic diseases. However it is entirely possible that this diet ...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
... it is entirely possible that this diet isnt the cause of prevention of these diseas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 28.8173652695 118% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 55.5748502994 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 2260.96107784 94% => OK
No of words: 432.0 441.139720559 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94212962963 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37888079982 2.78398813304 85% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 204.123752495 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523148148148 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 705.55239521 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4814659594 57.8364921388 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 119.503703932 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 23.324526521 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 5.70786347227 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.88822355289 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148147990771 0.218282227539 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433349934284 0.0743258471296 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328125124423 0.0701772020484 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832496227183 0.128457276422 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194823587242 0.0628817314937 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.3799401198 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.3550499002 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 98.500998004 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r ailments but also its opposing views. Although it mentions quite a few health benefits...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 345, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...umans suffer from various diseases that didnt take exist in the past. Lastly, there i...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 468, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...the food eaten and diseases cured which isnt necessarily true. Firstly the passag...
^^^^
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
... was the case in the past. Todays human isnt as physically active and thus may suffe...
^^^^
Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...is helping those with chronic diseases. However it is entirely possible that this diet ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
... it is entirely possible that this diet isnt the cause of prevention of these diseas...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 28.8173652695 118% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 55.5748502994 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 2260.96107784 94% => OK
No of words: 432.0 441.139720559 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94212962963 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37888079982 2.78398813304 85% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 204.123752495 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523148148148 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 705.55239521 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4814659594 57.8364921388 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 119.503703932 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 23.324526521 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 5.70786347227 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.88822355289 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148147990771 0.218282227539 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433349934284 0.0743258471296 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328125124423 0.0701772020484 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832496227183 0.128457276422 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194823587242 0.0628817314937 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.3799401198 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.3550499002 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 98.500998004 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.