The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010

Essay topics:

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

The chart illustrates the number of people in different sexes succeeding in their driving test in one Asian nation over the course of 30 years, starting in 1980.

As can be seen from the chart, both men and women's percentages witnessed a rise throughout the survey with the figure for the former lower than that for the latter group.

In particular, almost half of the women in the country passed the driving exam in 1980, as opposed to well under a third of men. The next 20 years recorded a two-stage growth in the number of females succeeding in the test, first gradually to above 50% in 1990 then rocketed to nearly 70% in the following 10 years. This was also the highest percentage registered in the survey. After that, the figure slightly decreased by 5% in 2010.

Meanwhile, the same pattern happened with the percentages of men passing the driving test in the first 20-surveyed years. Standing at nearly 30% in 1980, the number increased to approximately 38% in the next 10 years before reaching the 1990's figure of the women in 2000. Then, it plateauted until the end of the survey.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, while, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72916666667 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50693482608 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598958333333 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.5923948875 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275312247315 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094430579831 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803631605372 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162818788025 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441890825105 0.0819641961636 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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