The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company. "According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising.
Here in this argument authors main focus on the incresing number of movie viewers. During past years auther says that the number of movie viewer are decreased but the rating and reviews of movie are still good and for this auther has given one argument that is lack of awareness.
Yes, lacking of awareness can be true and it can be inrease by enough advertising and promotion of movie before screening. Also spending some shares on advertising is can helpful because movie reviewes are not bad but increasing interest in peoples is more necessary here.
But, this can not be only reason to decrease in the number of viewrs. There would be many other reasons likes financial problem, during which time the movie is screened. If there is any kind of financial problem than it can not only solved by advertising. Here people may have full information about movie but they avoid it by financial problem. In this case rather than spending money on advertising it is necessary to decrease the cost of ticket.
In another case If there if movie related with some nation love than it should realease on this kind of events And another big thing is wich movie screening simultaneously with their movie. It can be possible during earlier movies no another good movie is screening and more viewer was there.
So, At the end we can conclude that there are many reason behind decresing number of viewer and producer can try his best in advertising or other thing by analyzing its reasons because the movie are of good quality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
Here in this argument authors main focus on the incresing number of movie viewer...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...nd promotion of movie before screening. Also spending some shares on advertising is ...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'canned'.
Suggestion: canned
... spending some shares on advertising is can helpful because movie reviewes are not ...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...uring which time the movie is screened. If there is any kind of financial problem ...
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Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: IF_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
... of ticket. In another case If there if movie related with some nation love tha...
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Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'movies'' or 'movie's'?
Suggestion: movies'; movie's
...ovie. It can be possible during earlier movies no another good movie is screening and ...
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Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...t can be possible during earlier movies no another good movie is screening and mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 2260.96107784 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 264.0 441.139720559 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78409090909 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.56307096286 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42525724498 2.78398813304 87% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 204.123752495 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526515151515 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 705.55239521 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8164168693 57.8364921388 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 119.503703932 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.324526521 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.70786347227 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175904485068 0.218282227539 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719087571377 0.0743258471296 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371271274734 0.0701772020484 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102320799254 0.128457276422 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338065148363 0.0628817314937 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.3799401198 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.3550499002 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.5979740519 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 98.500998004 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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