Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
The technological advances have increasingly enabled people to work and to study regardless of their locations through numerous platforms. I firmly believe that this phenomenon clearly brings more consequences since it can adversely influence both people's health and work performance.
It is undeniable that classrooms and offices, which are initially designed solely for work, bring far more benefit to our performance. These professional spaces ensure a high level of facility and stationery items which are needed to complete our tasks. My mother, for instance, an accountant having to work from home during the Covid 19 pandemic, faced many difficulties while trying to finish her missions. In the previous period, she could get documents signed by heads of each departments within several minutes by walking to their offices. Due to remote working, she had to write many emails and wait for such a long time in order to do that same job, which was very ineffective. The story of my mother is one of many showing that working from home negatively affects on work productivity.
Furthermore, there are many health problems stemming from online learning and working. This type of work requires people spend an enormous amount of time sitting and glueing their face to digital screens, leading to many illness and disorders, such as: shortsightedness, muscle cramps,...For example, in my city, after the lockdown period, when most people worked from home, a considerable increase in the number of people diagnosed with eye problems was recorded. The majority of those are students and office workers, who admitted spending far more time using digital devices for study and work than they had done before. This example is a powerful indicator that remote working and distant learning cause many negative effects on human health.
In conclusion, despite gaining an increasing popularity among the public, in my opinion, working from home and online studying still pose a great threat on work efficiency and humans' health. People should carefully consider these disadvantages before making a shift to this new type of work and study.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun illness seems to be countable; consider using: 'many illnesses'.
Suggestion: many illnesses
...eir face to digital screens, leading to many illness and disorders, such as: shortsightednes...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...such as: shortsightedness, muscle cramps,...For example, in my city, after the loc...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... as: shortsightedness, muscle cramps,...For example, in my city, after the lockdown...
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Line 3, column 702, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to cause'
Suggestion: to cause
...hat remote working and distant learning cause many negative effects on human health. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29793510324 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78235993142 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631268436578 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1612816666 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.285714286 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25334197613 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892549235324 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583423295987 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155791684654 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247116011218 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.