For many people, the reason they work hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Earning money is one of the top priorities for every hard-working person. I agree with the statement because money is essential for everyone. Nevertheless, many others work with passion, self-satisfaction and success irrespective of money.
To begin with, fulfilling daily needs and house core expenses are escalating rapidly, and thereby hardworking is inevitable for many people. Inflation also plays a major role in this attitude of many. People around the world are not completely found with a silver spoon in their mouth, therefore getting money is their daily target. There are limitations to the government to supply basic needs to people in the vast majority then also insist the people work hard for themselves and the family. Nowadays, many people are not satisfied or do not have enough salary to secure their life therefore part-time jobs are even essential for many.
On the other hand, some people are not considering money as their first intention. Such people work hard for their interests, improve inborn talents, and explore the world. For instance, film actors often act free of cost to make a character which is close to their heart. Similarly, entrepreneurs in the fashion industry and farming are dedicated to their work to complete or flourish their products rather than the earnings. Moreover, many social workers and patriotic often work hard for the development of the nations instead of enlarging their pockets.
To sum up, it is true that earning money is inevitable for everyone and thereby hard work is indeed for some. Nevertheless income is not only the target for people who got accomplishment from enthusiasm and born talents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...for themselves and the family. Nowadays, many people are not satisfied or do not ...
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Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...d thereby hard work is indeed for some. Nevertheless income is not only the target for peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, it is true, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2156133829 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76381489353 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591078066914 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2832223404 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332992498968 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121855021473 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743160155337 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223622735339 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459520561566 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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