A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Requiring all of the students of a nation to study the same national curriculum until they enter college is not a very wise and justified course of action mandated by a country.
From an early age, children begin to display their aptitude towards different fields and courses. If it were mandated that every student has to study the same courses prescribed under a national curriculum till they enter college, these students would have to deal with such subjects as well, for which they neither have interest nor aptitude. It would be equivalent to forcing a student with aptitude in the sciences to study art and history till they enter college. This particular student would resent these courses, and would probably not perform well, which would decrease his GPA, thus hampering his chances of studying his chosen field at a prestigious university.
According to reputable surveys, it is noted that 35% of the student population does not enrol in higher degrees in a college after high school. They either not intend to or are unable to continue with their education. If a national curriculum is enforced, we would have 35% of students, a massive section of the population dissatisfied with their education and unable to find an appropriate vocation, since they do not have specialised education in any field. They would have basic and medium-level knowledge of the field they are interested in.
It is however important to note that having a national curriculum would ensure that the entire population of students are taught the same things, thus, they would have the same level of knowledge and would be free to pursue their course of interest in college. This would be beneficial as then everyone would have a basic working knowledge of all courses in general.
To conclude, it can be said that it is unwise to mandate the students to study the same national curriculum till they enter college.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
Requiring all of the students of a nation to study the same ...
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Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...ring his chances of studying his chosen field at a prestigious university. Accordi...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, thus, well, as to, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 319.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99373040752 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61715124627 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485893416928 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5387021166 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.75 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253685676122 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116274288863 0.0831039109588 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966035929102 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194312154647 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088424588988 0.0667264976115 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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