Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the adverse influences of climate change on the general growth of the whole globe have been reported densely, emphasizing the urgency of tackling this phenomenon. Nevertheless, over a long course of time, numerous measures have been taken but all proved to be ineffective, which results in the inclination of people to become reconciled to the situation rather than keep on preventing it. Discussed in the essay below are the reasons for why accepting climate change should never be the priority of humans today.
To commence with, co-existing with climate change may pose a greater threat for humanity's development. Inevitably, the abnormality in weather conditions will negatively impact a wide range of aspects such as agriculture, transportation, marketplace,...which eventually leads to the economic crisis. The impoverished nations and developing ones may be confronted with lost seasons and degrading life quality while the developed countries may witness massive unemployment and huge losses in their revenues. People may consider living with climate change simple but in fact, the devastation of this phenomenon is unexpected and unimaginable, hence, it is entirely impossible for them to combat the aforementioned challenges.
Additionally, encouraging people to accept instead of preventing is akin to promoting irresponsibility-a negative attitude towards life. Humans are the owners of the Earth, meaning that they assume the responsibility to face up with every obstacle that emerges. Besides, the environmental issues predominantly stem from the uncontrollable humans’ manufacturing activities together with the lack of proper awareness. Loads of advanced inventions have been created and served for the humans’ life, so when it comes to the reverberations, humans’ ignorance and irresponsibility are what worsens the problems and may lead to the disappearance of the whole human evolution. Therefore, everyone should be encouraged more to protect the natural surroundings and actively halt climate change before it is too late.
To recapitulate, solving climate change should be of topmost priority regarding the goals for sustainable development in the contemporary era. It is hardly feasible to live with the detrimental effects of this phenomenon, thus, each individual should stretch to their full lengths to preserve the environment, raise their awareness and live in a more environmentally-friendly way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...agriculture, transportation, marketplace,...which eventually leads to the economic...
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Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...The impoverished nations and developing ones may be confronted with lost seasons and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2091.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80833333333 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5114000848 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.0093889884 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.357142857 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180213198259 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624071818198 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407980246733 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106941792106 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128436748503 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.72 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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