An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet. Since millet is already a staple food in Tagus, people will readily adopt the new variety. To combat vitamin A deficiency, the government of Tagus should do everything it can to promote this new type of millet.
"health is Wealth, without health nothing makes sense".
health is very important for wellbeing of people on a personal as well as a community level. being healthy will help the community to not only be protected from any diseases but also aid in achieving their day-to-day activity seamlessly. vitamins and Minerals are the most important elements constituting the daily diet that helps provide the necessary elements for living a healthy life. various vitamins cover various different aspect of healthy living. For example, vitamin A helps to aid the eyes, prevent diseases relating to eyesight, help to maintain a sane mental balance that is very much required.
In Tagus, there has been reportedly acute shortage of vitamin A in the diets of the common public. due to this deficiency, the population is exposed to diseases relating to eyesight like "Night-Blindness" where the affected cannot see at night. apart from major notable diseases like this, its deficiency can lead to increased strain on eyes, leading to headaches, migraines - affecting sane living. With the population exposed to these kind of problems, it becomes the responsibility of the governing body to intervene, help the people reduce their sufferings. apart from this moral responsibility, the ineffectiveness induced due to the problems linked to deficiency, it results in economical losses in an already impoverished nation.
With the world a global place, an international development organization has developed a new variety of millet that has high content of vitamin A. millet being the staple diet of the commoners, the new variety can easily be adapted by the society. I believe this new breed of millet to be groundbreaking in undertaking the humongous task of improving vitamin A contents.
being widely known about the nationwide deficiency of vitamin A in food, the common public would by themselves be looking for ways to incorporate it into their diets. By introducing the new variety of millet, it will ease the process further. millet being the staple diet, the new variety will face little to no resistance in the market adoption. The people will happily adopt the new variety in their day-to-day eating.
Furthermore, due to economical crises, to facilitate and encourage the farmers to grow the new variety, the government is introducing subsidies. these subsidies will further help to promote its usage, making it easily affordable by the masses.
The government will have further more critical role to play for this recommendation to be successful. The main shortcomings that this project can face include increased risk of disease caused by genetically modified crops, reduction in the land fertility when cropped, high maintenance cost of the crops, susceptibility to the ranges of temperatures faced at storage facilities. government can surely intervene and keep a check on all of these shortcomings for the project to be a success as predicted.
The government in addition to providing subsidies to promote the growth of the new variety, should keep a check on the quality of outcomes that the farms produce. They should keep a check to ensure that the new breed does not induce further more deficiencies or diseases upon consumption, the outcome of farm produce does not degenerate the land on which it is cropped. apart from these checks, due to predicted extreme demand in the market that the new variety on introduction will have, government should also take up a part to ensure safe and healthy storage, transportation as well as distribution among the masses. Obviously, as with any project, there are spaces for improvements as well as issues that can arise on the go for which cannot be foreseen. So the government should be cautious and alert.
keeping in mind the government's duty and responsibility, the new breed of millet that is planned to be introduced with the recommendations will surely help its people's health.
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e-rater score report
Out of topic. This is an argument essay not an issue essay.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 11 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 634 350
No. of Characters: 3224 1500
No. of Different Words: 287 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.018 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.085 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.92 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 245 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 185 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 121 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 90 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 35.222 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 20.943 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.317 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.674 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.103 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 8 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Health
...hout health nothing makes sense'. health is very important for wellbeing of peop...
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Line 2, column 93, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Being
... personal as well as a community level. being healthy will help the community to not ...
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Line 2, column 238, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Vitamins
...g their day-to-day activity seamlessly. vitamins and Minerals are the most important ele...
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Line 2, column 389, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Various
...ary elements for living a healthy life. various vitamins cover various different aspect...
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Line 2, column 477, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A help' or simply 'helps'?
Suggestion: A help; Helps
...of healthy living. For example, vitamin A helps to aid the eyes, prevent diseases relat...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
...in A in the diets of the common public. due to this deficiency, the population is e...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Apart
...where the affected cannot see at night. apart from major notable diseases like this, ...
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Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... living. With the population exposed to these kind of problems, it becomes the responsibil...
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Line 3, column 573, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Apart
...elp the people reduce their sufferings. apart from this moral responsibility, the ine...
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Line 4, column 359, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A content' or simply 'contents'?
Suggestion: A content; Contents
...the humongous task of improving vitamin A contents. being widely known about the nationw...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Being
...task of improving vitamin A contents. being widely known about the nationwide defic...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Millet
...llet, it will ease the process further. millet being the staple diet, the new variety ...
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Line 6, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...day-to-day eating. Furthermore, due to economical crises, to facilitate and enc...
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Line 6, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...he government is introducing subsidies. these subsidies will further help to promote ...
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Line 7, column 379, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Government
...mperatures faced at storage facilities. government can surely intervene and keep a check o...
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Line 8, column 371, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Apart
...nerate the land on which it is cropped. apart from these checks, due to predicted ext...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Keeping
...ernment should be cautious and alert. keeping in mind the governments duty and respon...
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Line 9, column 21, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...utious and alert. keeping in mind the governments duty and responsibility, the new breed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, well, apart from, for example, in addition, in short, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.9520958084 154% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 28.8173652695 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 95.0 55.5748502994 171% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 16.3942115768 128% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3328.0 2260.96107784 147% => OK
No of words: 634.0 441.139720559 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24921135647 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.01790360848 4.56307096286 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1189396813 2.78398813304 112% => OK
Unique words: 304.0 204.123752495 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479495268139 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 1045.8 705.55239521 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.76447105788 148% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.22255489022 213% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 19.7664670659 147% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.899106364 57.8364921388 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.75862069 119.503703932 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8620689655 23.324526521 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8275862069 5.70786347227 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 5.15768463074 174% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.25449101796 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 8.20758483034 305% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358721320537 0.218282227539 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928244908876 0.0743258471296 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734624197371 0.0701772020484 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149434201874 0.128457276422 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108725930658 0.0628817314937 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32208582834 107% => OK
difficult_words: 169.0 98.500998004 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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