Many countries are experiencing population growth and need more homes. Should these new homes be constructed in existing cities or should new towns be built in the countryside?
In the last 100 years, population number has significantly risen from 1,8bilion to 7.8bilion while the earth’s surface remained constant. The housing demands are constantly growing, as the trend to share flats with others is not attractive enough. It should not be surprising - everybody prefers to have some privacy. The question is, where new buildings should be constructed: inside or outside the cities?
First of all, proponents of the idea to expand present cities often claim that this is a cheaper solution, as all infrastructure is already made. Proper communication, public galleries or access to theaters is something which is growing with the city, and this might be really tricky to obtain it accordingly to the idea of building a new town. To construct a new object in agglomeration densely build-up the only issue is to possess a suitable plot for a new investment. Although when company owns it they can only multiply their capital because the prices of apartments in busy cities are ridiculously expensive.
On balance, opponents of exacerbating process of overcrowding cities, tend to believe that the only wise decision is to create artificial, new towns. They claim that the cost of living will be lower, as the land price and cost of services will not be overstated. Moreover, recently quite a few pundits have suggested that minor towns with their own infrastructure are reasonable environment to organize communities of neighbours, which will help each other when they were in need. Such phenomenon could bond people together and the level of crime will be low.
To conclude, both ideas have their advantages and disadvantages but in my personal opinion, if i could have chosen I would decide to live in suburbs where the prices of properties are lower and the communication to city center is still efficient.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 75, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
... advantages and disadvantages but in my personal opinion, if i could have chosen I would decide ...
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Line 13, column 96, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...vantages but in my personal opinion, if i could have chosen I would decide to liv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, if, moreover, really, so, still, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19333333333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96726659236 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636666666667 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.193217931 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.846153846 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221102332868 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761332012738 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693906855387 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116691506671 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626410116065 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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