In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is this a positive or negative development?
in contemporary life, people can do many activities via the internet such as shopping, working and also can keep in touch with friend daily by online video call. I believe that living without face-to-face communication has brought a significant number of drawbacks, so I would partly agree with this statement
On the one hand, we couldn’t avoid that a large of benefits that online activities could help us improve in our life. Technology nowadays take a vital part in the world due to the high-tech and the advantages help people in daily life. For example, the percentages people choosing online shopping in many e-commerce like Shopee, Tiki, Lazada, … without going anywhere but they can select and buy the product they need with a lower price. Online shopping have attached many people by the way that people need. Moreover, during the covid-19 nowadays the number of unemployment are highly increase, so only technology will be a chance for them to have a chance working through a new environment. Besides, communication is a huge impact on online technology century.
On the other hand, online communication has some drawbacks impact on our life at this time. People avoiding going out to meeting and rather using online method than direct way. Face-to-face meeting have many features that cannot be replaced and any situation. For example, meeting directly help people to sense emotion when talking to them, and the stabilization of the internet will become a huge problem use online technology. The connection always be a big trouble if people always choosing online environment rather than real life
In conclusion, despite the fact that advantages online technology could bring to our life and help us deal with many activities but it can have several damage on our relationships, which can only flourish on the basis of true communication.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
in contemporary life, people can do many a...
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Line 2, column 301, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun e-commerce seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much e-commerce', 'a good deal of e-commerce'.
Suggestion: much e-commerce; a good deal of e-commerce
...ages people choosing online shopping in many e-commerce like Shopee, Tiki, Lazada, … without go...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 444, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
...m use online technology. The connection always be a big trouble if people always choosing...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 145, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun damage seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some damage'.
Suggestion: some damage
...al with many activities but it can have several damage on our relationships, which can only flo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8162121547 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549342105263 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.5766447972 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.833333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225610512155 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871771032445 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056253611641 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148899426374 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101172495016 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
in contemporary life, people can do many a...
^^
Line 2, column 301, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun e-commerce seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much e-commerce', 'a good deal of e-commerce'.
Suggestion: much e-commerce; a good deal of e-commerce
...ages people choosing online shopping in many e-commerce like Shopee, Tiki, Lazada, … without go...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 444, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
...m use online technology. The connection always be a big trouble if people always choosing...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 145, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun damage seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some damage'.
Suggestion: some damage
...al with many activities but it can have several damage on our relationships, which can only flo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8162121547 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549342105263 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.5766447972 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.833333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225610512155 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871771032445 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056253611641 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148899426374 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101172495016 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.